Chrono Trigger Doujinshi

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I've been working on an rough early script for a Chrono Trigger Doujinshi. What do you think? Feel free to critique here or with GDrive comments!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GhJ3dP0Vq3KWIkUqvlv9zdJr5CzhIzjojEW78Zmb-r4/edit?usp=sharing